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Saturday, August 21, 2010

"Poetry"

I have no rhythm 
I have no beat 
Writing poetry is not my greatest feat 
All I know is what is in my heart 
So I just write it all, from the start 
I write of feeling 
Of passion 
Or hope and compassion 
I love Poetry....
Supreet

10 comments:

  1. You have made of rhythm and greatest feelings my daughter. Best wishes for your effective creation .

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  2. ਸੁਪ੍ਰੀਤ
    ਤੇਰੇ ਕੋਲ਼
    ਦਿਲ ਦੀ ਧੜਕਣ ਦੀ ਰਿਦਮ ਹੈ
    ਬਚਪਨ ਵਿੱਚ ਸੁਣੀਆਂ
    ਲੋਰੀਆਂ ਦੇ ਸੁਰ ਹਨ
    ਜਿਨ੍ਹਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਅਸੀਂ
    ਇਸ ਅਸੀਮ ਅਸਮਾਨ ਵਿੱਚ
    ਸਦੀਆਂ ਤੱਕ ਸੁਣਨਾ ਚਾਹਾਂਗੇ

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  3. You love poetry....
    And I love you!
    Very Chhweet!
    God Bless Ya!
    Ashish

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  4. Hi supreet,

    congratulations! at the age of 11 you have your own blog, I am amazed.. you have so much creativity and ability to express your thoughts ... You are absolutely right in describing your blog, SKY IS LIMITLESS and so is your creativity and capability.

    Wish you all the best in everything you do,
    May your big dreams come true

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  5. Dear Supreet very well done for writing poetry at such an early age. Sky is the limit for you..........Congrats to your mom too for teaching you such good values of life. Keep it up beta! I am sure many kids will follow your steps.

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  6. very nice poem supreet
    God bless you and your creation

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  7. Get your book published.. become an author..let the world know of your creativity or else get your own blog book!


    www.hummingwords.in/

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